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ChampionAnwar

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Very interesting.

Same as last time:

Story:
I thought it was funny how you has little inserts to every charachter with their stereotypes whilst having it in a story line. I particularly liked the one with Pinkie Pie at the beginning. I wouldn't say any were bad but that pinkie pie one made me laugh hehe. HOW DARE YOU DISRESPECT FLUTTERSHY! SHE NO DO BROHOOF! GRRRRR

Sound:
Seemed fine in this one, no complaints.

Animation and drawings:
Now I know you said those changing warbles were intentional but this is me and they do bug me. It just seemed inconsistant even though it was intentional.
I also picked up that the pinkie pie looks completely different in the 2 "angle shots" that you did, where as Twilight looked pretty much the same. Just something there.

Extra notes:
I loved how they seemed to have bags under their eyes, that was pretty funny to be honest. The little things like the weird brohoofing and the way they would talk made me giggle. In all honesty for me this was actually very humerous and I got a few kicks out of it. . Love your referencing and the godspeed. It all worked very well. .

What games was that cheat code for? xD

Mechabloby responds:

I was trying to get one pinkie pie to look dopier than the other. Nothing much I can do about the animation and how the wobbles change speed in places. I wanted that there and I don't want to change it. :)

Glad you got a kick out of this one too. The cheat code was just made up. :c

Again, thanks for your reviews. :)

Pretty good.

Okay, well for the most part this was actually really good. I'll break this down as I would normally:

Story:
Short, but it worked and I kept following it all the way through. It made me giggle. Not much more to add there, I like those little references that you put in there too. For me it just added a little more to it. (Dark humour is always growing on me)

Animation and drawings:
I thought that jumping man was funny seeing as he's old but somehow he has the energy to get to the toy store (not dissing old people). I didn't like the fact that I saw the word "c*nt" on the sun. . Dunno how I missed that befre, but unless that meant something. . it just seemed a little un needed for me. You know I like your warbles and this was no different, though I felt that this time it was a little to defined in terms of movement. . That's not a bad thing, I just prefer when you had those really quick and think warbles in each frame HUR HUR DUBSTEP! Nothing wrong, just something on a personal level.

Sound:
Now I never picked this up when I was listening on the TV as everything unless headphones are plugged in comes out in mono. I noticed the sound comes oput of the left speaker, this is also apparrent in some of your songs. . like that one where you only used your voice. . I think something's wrong there but youi can easily sort that out, though for me it is quite off putting.
I also noticed that in some diologue there was "static", as if you chopped the dialogue up into words and stuff. . Did you put it into Slicer? Just wondering. For me it sounds like that clicking noise. . Also I can hear when you change voice from clip to clip. . That's not a bad thing, but it's something I picked up.
The sound in terms of me hearing it was fine, nothing to complain about there. I could follow it quite easily.

More notes:
For the most part it was good, very funny for me. You know my humor and this stuff is weirdly funny. . There is probably some old man out there that can relate to this flash. . oh god wtf.

For me it was good but 2 little things let you down. . I should have picked up on the c*nt thng earlier but that seemd to have slipped my eyes. Good work Oliver. . I know this took a long time and for me it paid off.

Mechabloby responds:

Glad you noticed the energetic old man - I had the intention of having that as a silly little thing. The "cunt" on the sun was just a silly spur of the moment thing, as well as the adverts at the toy shop saying "shit a dick" and "shit toys £1". I think it's all innappropriate and that's why I felt like including it - I wanted a lot of my immaturity to come into this project.

The wobbly figures might seem a bit too refined but I tried making it cleaner than my previous works so that's probably why. A lot of people are mentioning the sound only comes out of the left speaker - not too sure why but that's one of the few things that isn't intentional. I didn't put my vocals into a slicer either so all of the clicking or static is simply what the microphone picks up when I'm not talking. That, or it's just transitioning from one sound clip to another.

I'm still glad you found it humorous and that you enjoyed it though. Thanks for the review - I really appreciate it. :)

Woooooo

You have good taste in musical choice in your animations ;D. I mist say it was really weird but I dunno it's was more comedy for me, I liked it a lot and I must say I followed it pretty well, good job overall. . I don't like madness animations much but this was pretty cool. /faved

Anwar Louis ^_^

XXBlinx responds:

thanks a lot :)

Hahahahaha!

In all honesty, this is one of the funniest things I've heard on Newgrounds to date. Like these "professionally done" parodies are trash compared to this. I suppose it's my opinion on humour. Very funny indeed, probably because it has that stupid element to it. It's a shame you don't do flash these days as much as you used to. . . I suppose some of the other reviewers don't share the same interests as me, but I can remember watching this on your youtube channel and nearly laughing myself silly XD. (I'm sad like that). .

In a nutsell, I'll be taking your place if you don't carry on flash animating XDDD. Awesome as always, you'll get where you want in time to come! :D

How did you compresss that all to 768KB? O.O

Mechabloby responds:

lol well thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll probably go back to animation overall soon enough, just give it time :P

also i didn't bother trying to compress this whatsoever. it's just generally a small file size i guess. D:

Awesome.

I really liked this, I've always wanted to do something like this. .I liked the little variations and how it wasn't boring like some of the other animations like this I see. In all fairness, I can't fault it. It's a good animation and I'm gonna fave this. .

Question: Did you use a graphic tablet? ^_^

cheshirecat1582 responds:

Thanks! Yeah I got a tablet a while back... still getting used to it... but this is the 1st flash (I think) that Ive used it all the way through... (I cant remember its been a while since I've submitted anything to newgrounds) But thank you for your review!

Ashley

Aaaaaahhh xD

It made me laugh at the end hehe. Forget what the others say, I thought it was good!

littlegoblet responds:

lol thanx buddy. Oh that is ok. I am not a professional in any way. this is just my hobby that I do for fun so I don't take it seriously but I still like to make people laugh when possible

Hmmm.

Though it was good for the most part, it just wasn't packed enough with stuff. . Granted it was funny, I'dve loved to see more. I know there were people dropping out left right and centre during the course of the thread and the making of this, so I understand.

Loved the Twilight thing, probably the best one for me, though it didn't have your wobbly thing that you usually have (not that that's a bad thing).

Rawr, thanks again for using my music. On the whole really good and taking into account that people dropped out, it was a pretty good collab ^^. Congratulations on making your firt successful collaberation! All the best. .

Anwar Louis ^_^

RASCLAT BUMBLESQUAT XD

Mechabloby responds:

Thanks, man. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to try something else by taking a break from the whole squiggly lines style I have with flash. I'll probably return to it, but not straight away. :P

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for making the music for us to use on our collab!

Oh man Mech.

2.04? D: What the heck is up with that?!

You never stop amazing me man. It must be my dry humor because I just seem to end up laughing all the way through your lets call them unique animations (that's a compliment by the way :D).

They looked like they were having a wank xD, and just everything else hehehehe. Also, the guy at the end had a big head and what looked to be 2 dicks O.O, oh and yes that is a chavvy version of a good song. . Glad you pointed it out :D

10/10 as always mech. . . I'd pay to watch your stuff.

Mechabloby responds:

thanks for the compliments, man. I always appreciate them :). you're way too kind lol

:D :D

Awesome as always Mech, for a short - still good. . aaaaand you used mah song <3! I'd give you 9000 out of 10 (no pun intended :D) Great job. Thanks a bunch.

Mechabloby responds:

Not a problem! I loved this piece and I've been listening to it ever since I downloaded it! :D

That was great!

I really liked the whole story and how it changed from happy and innocent to lowly and sad. I haven't seen an animation like this, in regards to the type of 'look' (excuse my noob flash terms), like the way it's set out and all.

What really stood out for me was the sort of 3D effect that you put accross (dunno if that's what it is, or what you call it hehe) it made it more true to life even if it was a flash cartoon thingy.

Unlike a lot of other flashes I've seen the music really relates the story which was really good.

To be honest, on the whole - it was a great animation and I loved it. I know you said to me you wern't too proud of it, but I am. This could easily be a small mini movie on TV (I see a lot that don't match up to this).

Also Daily 5th place speaks for itself, well done. Full mark from me.

Anwar Louis ^_^
(Review Request Club)

manuelberja responds:

thanks man, i really,really appreciate this, i will use your music later on!

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